Friday, August 4, 2017

Class Captain

I want to be class captain because I'm kind and nice to others when they are feeling down or really upset about something.

 Also because I am very helpful and can help others if they are stuck on something. And can also help others if they are very hurt by someone or something.

 Oh I also know how to look after the environment and pick up all the litter that others have dropped around the place ( which isn't really that fair or fun ).




So please please vote for me today
By Katie ❄️
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 12:02 PM

    Good job 👏 Katie, some advice could be takeaway one of your "also" in you second paragraph and change it too " and in am very helpful" instead of also because I am very helpful.

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    1. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 12:26 PM

      Thanks 🙏🏻 JAVAE for the comment here's some emojis you deserve it.🐶🐱🐭🐹🦄

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  2. Mr AdamsAugust 17, 2017 at 9:16 PM

    Really great constructive feedback Javae, well done. Thank you for taking it well Katie and thanking Javae for her comments.

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