Javae is a loony insane girl that seems engaged to the word omg. She has deep smooth hair like a tree blowing in the breeze. She is wanted for robbing the bank and stealing lollies from children. She has nut coloured eyes if you see her the reward is 1,000,000 dollars but it doesn't end here she, has really expensive glasses with cheetah patterns on them. Her hobbies are netball and making slime to use as a trap!
By Katie ❄️
Monday, June 19, 2017
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Hi Katie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikaela and I'm a year 6 student at St. Bernadette's School. I like how you explained Javae, you had lots of information on who Javae, is e.g she has deep smooth hair like a tree blowing in the breeze. Maybe next time you could add more detail by saying how much money she stole. What inspired you to write about Javae ?
Hi Mikaela only just got your message you know how you asked what inspired me um
ReplyDeleteWell we did a thing where you chose a person in your class and then you write about them
Hi Katie your description of javae was really nice I liked how you added what she did to become wanted. next time you could work on getting more into detai especially with things like her features.
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